17.12.09

Legitimation Attempt

Shot calls shot
No matter what came first
Forgotten fist, unstable brick
So long
Demolished fault, cause and effect
Twin tipped speech
Keep on
Turning the tables to throw them
Off

3 comments:

  1. Excellent, Lorenzo! The rhythm captured me at once; it echoes and bounces, enhaunced by the imagery.

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  2. fine piece, lorenzo.

    "Turning the tables to throw them
    Off"

    those lines howl!

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  3. Thank you so much Mule and Jenny!
    You're too kind.
    I will try to post more soon.

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