22.12.09

Wetlands

Paddle
boats paddle steamers
wriggle
out of oblivion,
fiddle
about with the rivers
a deadend riddle
for stagnant waters
muddled up
in rust.

2 comments:

  1. Gosh, you're so good at creating concise dense poems, Lorenzo! Glad that you've also joined Flowers of Sulfur. It's such a great vibrant site. Welcome.

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  2. Thank you PO!

    I appreciate so much the way you are encouraging me in keep on writing poetry. I really like Flowers of Sulfur and the poems you all are publishing there: they are inspiring and useful to me. I will publish something there too pretty soon.

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